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authorCody Brownstein <cbrownstein@liquidityllc.com>2018-09-03 19:55:15 -0700
committerCody Brownstein <cbrownstein@liquidityllc.com>2018-09-03 19:55:15 -0700
commit192905efc576b67f4d60e1a2b1f9c8bdc79f3eeb (patch)
tree84c4a17299af71a85f545ae0b30ea2139ad850f3
parent7031354e50800c2ca9d5f30bce9912ef5a24279c (diff)
Improve grammar
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@@ -103,10 +103,10 @@ Notice also the address beginning with "https://" (instead of "http://"). These
indicators that an encrypted connection using [[!wikipedia HTTPS]] is being
used.
-You should try to only use services providing HTTPS when you are sending or
-retrieving sensitive information (like passwords), otherwise it is very easy for
-an eavesdropper to steal whatever information you are sending or to modify the
-content of a page on its way to your browser.
+When you are sending or retrieving sensitive information (like passwords), you
+should try to only use services providing HTTPS. Otherwise, it is very easy
+for an eavesdropper to steal whatever information you are sending, or to
+modify the content of a page on its way to your browser.
[[!img https-everywhere.jpg link=no alt=""]]