|author||Tails developers <email@example.com>||2014-08-02 13:24:21 +0200|
|committer||Tails developers <firstname.lastname@example.org>||2014-08-02 13:28:59 +0200|
Many typography and structure improvements
- Remove trailing spaces - Limit the amount of exclamation marks - Use internal links when possible - Use bullet lists when possible - Use '===' for first level titles - End sentences with a dot - Remove trailing newlines
1 files changed, 20 insertions, 22 deletions
diff --git a/wiki/src/news/Tails_HackFest_2014.mdwn b/wiki/src/news/Tails_HackFest_2014.mdwn
index 2ce051e..cef5eff 100644
@@ -4,46 +4,44 @@
The first Tails [HackFest](https://tails.boum.org/blueprint/HackFest_2014_Paris/),
which took place on July 5-6 in Paris, was a great event: about 120 people
-attended on Saturday, 70 people on Sunday. We shared some good workshops
-and some very good food and homemade beer in a nice and friendly atmosphere.
+attended on Saturday, 70 people on Sunday. We shared some good workshops,
+some very good food, and homemade beer in a nice and friendly atmosphere.
-The slides of some talks have been
+The slides of some talks have been
[published](https://tails.boum.org/promote/slides/), but there is more
The first Tails stickers were distributed and you can also make your
-own! Just use [these](https://labs.riseup.net/code/issues/7011) SVG
+own! Just use [this SVG file](https://tails.boum.org/promote/tails-sticker.svg).
We are particularly happy that the HackFest attracted very different
people, so we were a quite diverse assembly. Probably thanks to our
(thanks Genma for the frensh translation)...
Some people talked about the HackFest:
-[jvoisin](http://dustri.org/b/tails-hackfest.html) , and... more?
+[jvoisin](http://dustri.org/b/tails-hackfest.html), and... more?
(please send links!)
-Thanks to: [IRILL](https://www.irill.org/) for the use of the place;
-[The Tor Project](https://www.torproject.org/), [Mozilla
-[Debian](https://www.debian.org/) for the sponsorship; Stefano
-Zacchiroli and Sylvestre Ledru for the organization help; and of
-course, all our fabulous attendees that made the event so interesting
+ - [IRILL](https://www.irill.org/) for the use of the place
+ - [The Tor Project](https://www.torproject.org/), [Mozilla
+ Foundation](https://www.mozilla.org/) and [Debian](https://www.debian.org/)
+ for the sponsorship
+ - Stefano Zacchiroli and Sylvestre Ledru for the organization help
+ - and of course, all our fabulous attendees that made the event so interesting
+New mailing lists
* <email@example.com>: public, archived
-talk about the non-technical decisions regarding the project
+talk about the non-technical decisions regarding the project.
* <firstname.lastname@example.org>: the new contact for journalists and people
-wanting to promote Tails. Just write to <email@example.com>; you
+wanting to promote Tails. Just write to <firstname.lastname@example.org>. You
can encrypt your email.
* <email@example.com>: public, archived
[mailing-list](https://mailman.boum.org/listinfo/tails-ux) to discuss
-Tails website and software user interfaces
+Tails website and software user interfaces.