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authorsajolida <sajolida@pimienta.org>2019-03-14 19:17:31 +0000
committersajolida <sajolida@pimienta.org>2019-03-14 19:32:34 +0000
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treefcbcdcec42810b365a6292ab963fff3250fbc351 /wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails
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-rw-r--r--wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/about.mdwn6
-rw-r--r--wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/homepage.mdwn15
2 files changed, 11 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/about.mdwn b/wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/about.mdwn
index 2eb69e2..660aab1 100644
--- a/wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/about.mdwn
+++ b/wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/about.mdwn
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Encrypted persistence
You can choose to **save some of your files and configuration** in an
encrypted Persistence, protected by a password. You can store in
-Persistence your working documents, your browser bookmarks, your emails,
+Persistence your documents, your browser bookmarks, your emails,
and even some additional software.
<!-- PIC: You can carry your personal things in your secure backpack and
@@ -51,8 +51,8 @@ Digital security toolbox
Tails includes many applications to **work on sensitive documents and
communicate securely**. All the applications included in Tails work
-out-of-the-box and are configured with safe defaults to **prevent you
-from doing mistakes**.
+out-of-the-box and are configured with safe defaults to **prevent
+mistakes**.
<!-- PIC: Camping gear -->
diff --git a/wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/homepage.mdwn b/wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/homepage.mdwn
index f9d5233..7f5c512 100644
--- a/wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/homepage.mdwn
+++ b/wiki/src/blueprint/explain_tails/homepage.mdwn
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ someone else's computer.</p>
<h3>Avoid surveillance and censorship</h3>
-<p>Tails uses the Tor network for online privacy and censorship
-circumvention.</p>
+<p>Tails uses the Tor network to protect your privacy online and avoid
+censorship.</p>
</div>
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ circumvention.</p>
<h3>No ads, no viruses, no tracking</h3>
-<p>Browse the Internet like it should be!</p>
+<p>Enjoy the Internet like it should be.</p>
</div>
@@ -53,8 +53,8 @@ circumvention.</p>
<h3>Digital security toolbox</h3>
-<p>Tails includes all you need to work on your documents and communicate
-securely with your contacts.</p>
+<p>Tails includes a selection of tools to work on sensitive documents and communicate
+securely.</p>
</div>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ securely with your contacts.</p>
<h3>Secure by default</h3>
-<p>All the tools in Tails are preconfigured with security in mind to make them
+<p>Tails and all its tools are configured with security in mind to make them
easy to use and prevent mistakes.</p>
</div>
@@ -71,7 +71,8 @@ easy to use and prevent mistakes.</p>
<h3>Free software</h3>
-<p></p>
+<p>You can download Tails for free and independent researchers can audit our
+work.</p>
</div>