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authorintrigeri <intrigeri@boum.org>2016-12-06 18:16:44 +0000
committerintrigeri <intrigeri@boum.org>2016-12-06 18:16:44 +0000
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parent1b2bc6b3308d1d04c48df2bce7312a8f5e223da6 (diff)
Various rephrasing (refs: #12013).
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diff --git a/wiki/src/blueprint/greeter_revamp_UI/test_greeter_1.0.0-alpha.mdwn b/wiki/src/blueprint/greeter_revamp_UI/test_greeter_1.0.0-alpha.mdwn
index 4014b85..e0109b2 100644
--- a/wiki/src/blueprint/greeter_revamp_UI/test_greeter_1.0.0-alpha.mdwn
+++ b/wiki/src/blueprint/greeter_revamp_UI/test_greeter_1.0.0-alpha.mdwn
@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ it :)
appear after the <span class="application">boot menu</span>, but before the
<span class="application">GNOME Desktop</span> appears.
-It lets you choose your language, unlock your
-persistence or add an additional setting at Tails startup.
+It lets you choose your language, enable your persistent volume, and
+set a number of other options.
# Why a new <span class="application">Tails Greeter</span>?
@@ -32,34 +32,39 @@ We had two main reasons to revamp <span class="application">Tails Greeter</span>
# What is new in the revamped <span class="application">Tails Greeter</span>?
-Nearly everything you can see! We worked for more than two years with designers
-to redesign the greeter interface.
+Nearly everything you can see has changed! We have been working for
+more than two years with designers to make <span
+class="application">Tails Greeter</span> easier to use.
# How to test the revamped <span class="application">Tails Greeter</span>?
-**Keep in mind that this is a test image.** It didn't went through our QA
-process and is not guaranteed to provide any security or anonymity.
+**Keep in mind that this is a test image.** We did not carefully test
+it so it is not guaranteed to provide any security or anonymity.
+
+But test wildly!
If you find anything that is not working as it should, please report to
-us <tails-testers@boum.org>.
+us on <tails-testers@boum.org>.
## Download and install
<a class="download-file use-mirror-pool"
-href="https://nightly.tails.boum.org/build_Tails_ISO_feature-8230-greeter-revamp-phase1/lastSuccessful/archive/build-artifacts/">Tails
-3.0~alpha1 ISO image including the revamped <span
+href="https://nightly.tails.boum.org/build_Tails_ISO_feature-8230-greeter-revamp-phase1/lastSuccessful/archive/build-artifacts/">experimental
+Tails ISO image including the revamped <span
class="application">Tails Greeter</span></a>
<div class="bug">
-You cannot install Tails 3.0~alpha1 from Tails 2.x. It is impossible
-as well to upgrade to Tails 3.0~alpha1 from Tails 2.x. So, either
-install or upgrade from a non-Tails system, or start Tails 3.0~alpha1
+<p>
+You cannot install this ISO image from Tails 2.x. It is impossible
+as well to upgrade to this ISO image from Tails 2.x. So, either
+install or upgrade from a non-Tails system, or start this ISO image
from DVD and then clone it to a USB stick.
+</p>
</div>
-To install the test ISO, follow our usual [[installation instructions|install]],
+To install this ISO image, follow our usual [[installation instructions|install]],
skipping the **Download and verify** step.
## What to test
@@ -69,7 +74,7 @@ skipping the **Download and verify** step.
[[!img greeter-alpha.png link="no" class="margin center" alt="Revamped Tails Greeter
alpha screenshot"]]
-Don't hesitate to test weird options, and verify they are taken into account in
+Don't hesitate to test all kinds of options, and ensure they are taken into account in
the Tails session.
If you find anything that is not working as it should, please report to
@@ -77,4 +82,5 @@ us on <tails-testers@boum.org>.
# Known issues in the revamped <span class="application">Tails Greeter</a>
-* <span class="application">Tails Greeter</span> is only available in english of french
+* <span class="application">Tails Greeter</span> is not translated in
+ many languages yet.